Missing you pitch
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Feedback -
After presenting our pitch to the class we recieved some feedback that would allow us to give a more improved presentation.
1. Through our presentation it was not made clear that we intended to capture the attention of an older age group. Although we talked a lot about aiming it at a teenage audience we showed in our speaking that we would like older members of the public to relate and interact with our video as well. If our video did not completely make this clear we were going to aim our magazine advertisement and digipack at a more mature age group.
2. By using natural lighting we would be able to portray the genre extremely well. As the weather is very unpredictable we were made aware to plan our visits on the sunniest days.
3. Both our pitch and idea was presented well.
4. By wearing different colours we will create a unique selling point which will relate to the visual style of The Saturdays. The band wore different colours on several occasions when promoting their album 'Headlines' which was released on the 16th August 2010. (Picture shown below)
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5. By using black and white for flashbacks this would make our video more diverse, when switching to black and white from colour this should keep the audience interested as they figure out both sides to our story.
To conclude, the feedback we received was very positive. Our idea was made clear with a structured plan. The class believed we could involve ourselves more into our video instead of focusing the storyline mainly on Emily and Joe.