Feedback:
Photographic Image(s): Framing, focus, camera angle, lighting and colour, background and mise-en-scene.
- Images are good and fit the genre of a girl group.
Typography and text: Choice of fonts, sizing, layout, colour, readability, language, register, content
- Font is well used and very appropriate
- Well colour co-ordinated
- We have addressed the audience in the correct way
- There are a few spelling mistakes that need to be corrected
Layout Decisions: Rule of thirds, text, positioning, sizing, balance of image and text, focus of attention
- Text position is very good
Genre codes and indicators of audience targeting:
- Colour in clothing was well co-ordinated and showed the impact of a girl band
- The inside booklet was a very strong idea
- Glamorous hair and makeup
What needs to be improved?
- The shape of the images need to be adjusted so they look more fitted.
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