On Friday's lesson, we presented our first draft to the class, we received both positive and negative feedback.
Feedback in terms of photographic image (Framing, Focus, Camera Angle, Lighting/Colour, Background and Mise-en-scene):
- The image stands out due to the colours used and gives the picture more depth.
- The black and white background compliments the image
- The pose demonstrates a girl band
- The direct gaze is appropriate and eye catching
- We each have our own unique look due to facial expressions
- There is a strong link with our music video
Typography & text: Fonts, sizing, layout, colour, readability, language register & content:
- The text giving information should be smaller that the song title.
- Logo's should be more to the left
- Make the beginning of each title word a capital
- The colour of the font matches our tops
Layout decisions: Rule of thirds, text positioning, sizing, balance of image & text, focus of attention:
- 'Missing You' should be higher and bigger
- The advert is interesting and eye catching
Genre codes and indicators of audience targeting:
- Genre code is very relevant!
- We have clearly targeted the right audience and imitates a girl band very well.
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