We had completed our video and would just need to add in a few small details at a later date such as my candidate number and the school center numbers. We had to present our video to the class and teachers again in order to gather some last minute feedback.
Feedback:
We received Strengths and weaknesses in terms of:
- Camerawork
- Mis en scene
- Editing for meaning
- Sound
1. Camerawork skills are strong and evident throughout (for example match on action)
2. The Citizen Kane influence was very effective and we had done well by adapating it into our story line.
3. Our performance and lip syncing was of a good standard
4. The storyline works well with the flashbacks
5. The dialogue scene showed an off balance sound
A quote from class mate Perry Allen... 'masterful'
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